All Comments on 'Ringing the Bell'

First time story, I mean, not that you were having it away for the first time. And for once, group sex means sex with a group!

editing is not writing. I mean can't find anything wrong, so much to editing. But there is very few story. girl comes in, gets fucked and says thank you. cheap porn flick ? could be couldn't it ?

I thought it was well written although it could have had a little more dialogue between Rose and the guys, and for such an innocent she sure turned into a slut pretty easily.

Well written and very erotic. I hope you write again soon.

GW

I absolutely loved this. I love when an innocent girl finds her naughty side and can turn into a dirty little slut. And thank you for an actual GROUP SEX scene!