All Comments on 'Risky Business'

I gave you a 5. I hope you continue the story.

First "and" foremost, great story. I love reading about seemingly quiet and shy people getting ahead. That your main character Ashley realized she had developed strong and deep feeling for her boss long before she recognized them and that he looked after her and protected her without judgement was beautiful. Don't let judgemental pricks with tiny dicks, stick you with their annoying ticks. This an ametuer author site and you will find way too many of them. I am suprised he had the balls to comment under his account name instead of going anonymous. Even as a professional author you can't be perfect nor can you please everyone. I am sure he is just angry he favorite character from your story "Jack the Jackass" got his just reward. I encourage you to continue to take up your creative license and write to your hearts content. If you choose another site or choose to keep them to yourself so be it. Don't let negativity hinder your mind from soaring.

I enjoyed reading it!