All Comments on 'Risky Business Ch. 05'

by Gently Does It

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Absolutely Amazing!

Too bad there's nothing above 100 to give you!

don87654don87654almost 16 years ago
Give the daughter some baby makers

Mommy should help Peter to become a daddy with daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Please keep on writing! You are sooo god at it!

Abslutely some of the best I have ever read! Please go on and indulge in your fantasyworld, for us! The fantasy playing in my mind, set up by your story is to read about how Peter helps Debbie becoming a experiensed woman, helped by her mother, and Peters wife. That would be, for me, the perfect 4-some. Then, after Diane and Katy had a fling, Ian and Diane could end up together with Katy and Debbie... O'h my godddd what stories you could bring to life on those themes... Best of luck, with whatever you choose to write. Please, just don't stop!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Where are you?

It doesn't seem as if you are writing anymore. There seems to be so much unfinished stuff. I've really enjoyed your works, especially this one. Thank you for what you have produced.

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