All Comments on 'Risky Business Trip Ch. 02'

by Miss_Sub_Miss

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent Pacing

This story is as simple as it is satisfying.

It's short, searing hot, and wastes no words. I'd love to see more, but do take your time -- your editing and revision help make this the smooth sail that it is.

spankfunforspankfunforover 10 years ago
Emma didn't know she was a willing slave!

Emma had no idea she needed to be dominated by a sadist to become a real woman and , ultimately, his slave as long as he keeps her!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

You need to carry on with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

★★★★+ [4+ (4.4/5=88%)!

Emma is a keeper. Period!

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