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All Comments on 'Riverside Woods'

by Belaralia

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Simple, but ingenious plot.

Not great but good. Please keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Check out your trees ...

OK story, but it wasn't a redwood. A mature redwood's branches start about 150 feet up the tree. Being a pine tree, they offer little in the way of protection in rain. Details like this detract from your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
nice

You sound as if u like good wholesome sex....I liked the story

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