All Comments on 'Road Trip'

by BellaMia319

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Next pArt

Get the police to join in

peebudypeebudyover 7 years ago
hot

nice story. would like to read the prequel of when step daddy first fucked her.

NaughtySouthernGentNaughtySouthernGentover 7 years ago
Great follow up

I love the anticipation between the two and your descriptive style. I also like that the sex scenes don't sound like an anatomy class. Definitely a 5 star writer!

CassieKCassieKover 7 years ago
What a shame!

A great start, but somewhere along the way her horny mum needs to be involved.

Add spice or it will just be another step dad fucks daughter story.

Your good at telling the story, but make it erotic and with twists.

Fill my mind with wild fucking adventures.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
ONLY 4

Nice follow up to the first one but only gave it 4 stars since it took 12 years between the two chapters, then it was too short and left us hanging. It's already been 6 months since this one was posted and no follow up yet? I sure as heck hope it won't take another dozen years and be just as short. I am NOT a patient person.

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