All Comments on 'Road Trip'

Sorry, but this is bad. You need to take a class in critical writing and learn something from it. These are just words on the screen and half of them are just rambling to fill up the screen.

You'd think after writing so many stories, your writing would improve. It's not. Matter of fact, it's getting worse.

Listen, we all know you are only writing these shitty little stories for the Survivor Contest. You already have enough foolish points to win.

Please stop writing. You're ruining the site for real writers.