All Comments on 'Road Trip Ch. 03: Rose and Renee'

it three stars, but please don't write about breaking their hymen after they just got fingered.

Nobody can be as good to a girl's cute little coochie like her own daddy. Her father's nimble fingers now, his fat veiny daddy-dick soon.

Is Art Kent's brother or his father? You go back and forth with brother ...father..son...and more brother...If you can't keep it straight...then why are you bothering us with this story? And what's with the twins? Where they brought up in a convent? They don't know squat about sex and don't seem to ever have brought themselves off either! Just a little far fetched ...don't you think...Maybe back in the middle ages...no...not even then!

Thanks Anonymous. I'm sorry you were thrown by the complexity of the relationships. Arthur is Kent's FATHER after Arthur fucked his own mother. Arthur is also, therefore, Kent's BROTHER. This is what happens when two boys are born of the same woman.

As for Rose and Renee, well, their limited experiential base is a by-product of their cloistered family life. However, they soon will know 'squat' (and thrust) about sex. Don't worry about that. MP2 :-)

Stop pulling your pud and you just might improve your appalling grammar

Regards

Big k1960

Thanks? An example (of 'appalling grammar' not pud-pulling, that is) would have been helpful. I always accept constructive criticism. BTW, are you aware that 'Engrish' is an insensitive racially demeaning term? MP2 :-)

like the story. great characters, lots of good tease.