All Comments on 'Rob and Elise Ch. 02'

For the read.

“The previous night she and Christian came to the end of their relationship.” – THAT came up awfully suddenly!

“They'd been drifting apart for a few months as his work had taken him away more and more often. She had been forced, inexorably, to come to terms with who she might really want to be with”

Nothing was said about any of that in Ch 1!

And again, nothing was said in Ch 1 about Robert having any concerns about his relationship with Samantha. It seems like you want to bring Robert and Elise together, so you have manufactured dissatisfaction with their current relationships.

“Robert wondered at both the meaning of the term and, once he looked it up, her motivation for mentioning having a waxed vagina.” – First, I’m surprised he didn’t know what a Brazilian was, and second, despite her feelings, her motivation for mentioning it was just a teasing response to his saying he would shave his legs.

I hope we don't have to wait as long for Ch 3 as we did for Ch 2!