by victorious
Interesting plot but I know there had to be a way to tell the story without quite so many "THENs". Also the logical progression in the binding process might have begun with immobilizing the bigger threat to the completion of the intruders goal....unless you are trying to say that the petite Asian woman was more intimidating than her husband was. Just saying. One more thing. 150 orgasms between the two of them....really??? Okay.
3 stars for the effort.
I came 343 1/2 times halfway through this. I blew my load so much that it created a small lake which washed away a mountaintop near me.
if emotionless. A few technical issues - her "small petite body", as opposed to her large petite body? - "took so (some?) Vaseline" - "insider" (should have been "inside" - just to name a few.
Terrific story very different from what I expected and extremely enjoyable. Would wish for a sequel.