by vickivale
What a dumb ass slut. Now tell the second chapter where he divorces the slut and beats the living shit out of his so called best friend. 2* and that's being generous!
would be much more erotic if the clever hero gave her a seditive and had his way with her while she was passed out.
Roberta (as written) has to be the the most naive, stupid, gullible married woman I have ever heard about. Granted she is allowing herself to be manipulated by one of the worst type of backstabbing friends there could be. But even then how can she swallow such a ridiculous line that Ramon is feeding her ? Were the story to continue the best outcome would be if the husband finds out what the hell is going on and he divorces Roberta as fast as possible.
This is an amusing story..and the first of a number of episodes, I think. It is quite funny...whether you intended that or not, is another matter, but either way...it amused me, and I look forward to the next 'lesson'...
This is one of the worst stories I have ever read. "Roberta gives him a major boner." Are you 15 years old? I don't know any grown men that would say something like that. Go back to school and listen to your teachers not fantasize about them.