All Comments on 'Rock Me Honey'

Very hot. I wish you would write more.

Needs a lot of work. Sloppy syntax and tortured tenses make Will Smith unhappy ah clem.

First of all let me say that I think the idea of your story was absolutely brilliant. Maybe it needed a little naughty edge just to make it better. But seriously the grammar was just horrible, I'm sure you can improve on that though. Keep trying!

I love reading stories about married couples that still enjoy screwing each other and the story was set up like any regular day with everyday people making it credible.