All Comments on 'Rocked by a Hurricane'

You broadly hint at more shenanigans during the followup visit to the Carolina coast.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

There's parts that need to be done. Like how did we not hear about this. But the reader has no clue. I mean the reader figures out its a storm but you don't let us know why the sister says that. There's other things but you get the idea.

Can we please hear if there was more and how she eventually got pregnant? Great story!

Don't you understand how the pill works? She has to take it daily at the same time of day for a month before it is affective. Skipping, even if there is no sex, is just stupid. You have to start all over again.

I enjoyed your story but wished they would have ended differently as it is similar to your other one

to the whiny anon beneath this why are you bitching about the whole pill thing also if you stop taking it for a few days after you didn't take it you are not really able to get pregnant since the hormones they modify are still being messed with you have to wait about as much time as you do for them start working when you initially start taking them

This is kind of confusing, and very inconsistent. The last two chapters are a waste in print.

Getting pregnant with BF before marriage was weak .

BROTHER should have knocked her up and BF should have thought it was his.

Maybe more sneaky sex,

Can’t wait for the next chapter with sibling making oof.

that's where you are going to end it? you have at least 2 more chapters maybe more. please continue.

It was pretty good until the end, she got pregnant by the wrong person. Begs for a rewrite.

That was poorly written and the ending was even worse

Ending kinda sucks tbh. Everything before that is fine

Its ok. 4 stars

good until the ending.

Well that crashed and burned