All Comments on 'Rocky Mountain Summers'

Again a great story flawed by stupid mistakes. Please, please get an editor. I'll happily do it.

"Brian lay on the bed looking up at the ceiling thinking."

What was the ceiling thinking?

A simple comma would have made all the difference between nonsense and coherence.

"Brian lay on the bed looking up at the ceiling, thinking." Sorted.

"the rocks were slipperier"

They had more slippers?

"lightening" means becoming lighter. The flashy stuff that comes with thunder is "lightning". Two different words.

Dumbass, sorry amateur stories aren't perfect. Great story Erica. Read past any "mistakes" and "see" the story -- that's what I do!

I love how your stories aren't just about sex, but also the thoughts of the participants leading to sex...or not leading to it, in the case of Brian and Autumn. I hope you start submitting again. I look forward to more!

Good build up then.....! Like a cold shower!

Not fair to cheat your readers.

You can build and retreat but you have to climax eventually!

It would be really nice to read a followup to this wonderful story, now that several years have passed.

I love stories like this with real people doing believable things. You have a gift, and that gift certainly brightened my day for a bit. Sorry it took so long for me to discover this story. It's difficult to search on, "well written, believable stories".

Good read but a little disappointing in the end. Almost like the writer was interrupted and then quickly finished - didn’t even get into detail with Mary and Brian at the end, let alone Autumn. I really like the attraction and closeness between Autumn and Brian and that Cathy was aroused by it… Thx