by 12Pooky12
... like spelling: Is it Cassey or Casey? Cumming or chumming? Its or it's? Mistakes take the reader out of the moment.
Otherwise, nice story! Looking forward to part 2.
Thank you! Feels good when someone enjoys one's work. I hadn't thought of a second part, but I will now.
Thanks
T
fantastic story, sex and bucking bronco action. Wish I could give you more than five stars...... Loved the detail and characters.... surprising how you got such detail down for one page.... I do hope that this will turn into a part two....... Very good