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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Some little things ...

... like spelling: Is it Cassey or Casey? Cumming or chumming? Its or it's? Mistakes take the reader out of the moment.

Otherwise, nice story! Looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
thanks

Thank you! Feels good when someone enjoys one's work. I hadn't thought of a second part, but I will now.

Thanks

T

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
Ride'em cowgirl !!!

fantastic story, sex and bucking bronco action. Wish I could give you more than five stars...... Loved the detail and characters.... surprising how you got such detail down for one page.... I do hope that this will turn into a part two....... Very good

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