All Comments on 'Rodin in the Bushes'

I loved the twist at the end and the erotic sex. I suggest an editor, just to work out the little things we all miss when we're writing. But, still a very good read that I hope others take a look at, too!

I liked the story too. It was a cute fantasy with a comical twist at the end.

For a first time story I think this is very good. hope to see more stories from you.

Your story was fabulous - very sexy & erotic without being grotty. The detail with which you described your character preparing for her blind date was great to read & helped to build some anticipation. Excellent job!