All Comments on 'Roger and Anna'

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a wonderful start. You should continue with more of it.

I hope that you will continue with this couple, or start another story. I thoroughly enjoyed this one!

Wonderful story. I can't wait to read the next chapter, please write it soon.

I hope you will continue with this story, it is very good & should be continued.

way to rushed just another wam bam thankyou maam story. also when he was in the master bedroom how could he see her nipples through her top was she right outside the window? if the window was more than ten feet away from the water no way in hell could he see her nipples. in short it was way to short way to rushed and way to unrealistic. needs a total rewrite and a writer that knows how to write fiction not fantasy.

no real background a rush to sex and no end this should have been chapter two of three or four not a stand alone story.

I thought it was great. People are jealous. Keep writing!

Just needs to be finished with more chapters. Thanks

Well written story

Sexual exciting

The right length and details

Thank you, please continue