All Comments on 'Rogue and Rake Ch. 01'

Excellent, well done story. The few oops were easy enough to slide over and didn't detract from the story at all. Never hesitate to tell the full story. There are a good number of readers that while we fully enjoy the shorter hot sex stories, the longer involved tales get our appreciation also.

Give it a go and see what happens

very nice indeed...definately want to read more of it...make the story as "full" as you want as long as you carry on and don´t stop in the middle of it like so many others here...

Well done!

Kept me wrapt throughout the read. Great word structure and decent description. Excellent first submission as it is a Worthwhile story.

Nicely done.

Your doing great with the story so far the story helps add to the sex scenes, u aren't just jumping from one session to the next if anything I think you've captured the intoxication of the first night beautifully! Keep it up!

Enjoying this start. Keep it up please.