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- COMMENTS
CharlieBigCock69almost 6 years agoI'm brand new to this site just joined today. And this story is the 20th story I've read and I don't understand why it's low scored. So I had to make your story my very first comment. You're writing is top notch. It's way better than some of the crap I read so far. Your descriptions of Bethany getting dressed had me stroking my cock. I'm a sucker for the schoolgirl uniform especially hers. I appreciate how methodical you are when it comes to revealing information which I don't think other readers are picking up on and that's a DAMN SHAME. Bethany and Simon are obviously in love with one another and should be together. You should write another chapter. Good luck with your future stories. You have a new fan!
CharlieBigCock69
TrippyLuvalmost 6 years agoAuthorGive 'Role-Play Fridays' a read if you haven't or read it again because you like it. All comments and feedback are welcome. Thanks! Have an awesome day!
TrippyLuvalmost 6 years agoAuthorThank you for leaving a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully, the correct submission will be up as soon as the powers that be post it. I hope you'll come back and read the correct posting!
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI liked the story very much and the role-play idea. I didn’t mind the “da-da” so much because Simon is the grand-dad anyway and the only male in the household apparently. Bethany refers to him as dad, logically, so that the baby would mimic her isn’t too far fetched. But it definitely is better that this error will be corrected. Sublime story, nevertheless.
