All Comments on 'Rolled in the Hay'

No, it was not the most original thing out there but that doesn't make it any less well executed. I like the time you spent telling us about Laura, getting to know her so we could follow her thrill at the experience. Keep it up!

Good story, but as soon as you mentioned the sheep not be alarmed by the intruder, I knew instantly it was her boyfriend. I think it sorta ruined the mystery.

I find the twist at the end makes the story interesting. It’s a good style of story-telling. The author succeeded on putting some hints that a reader can later on relate with his keen observation of what was going on with the narrated events. Writers have their own school of thoughts to base their techniques of story-telling. As a reader, we must not be too critical of someone’s work. No body is perfect. Let us just be appreciative of the stories; they are free. And not all of us can make creative or literary compositions.

Thank you author, and keep on writing!