by lovelyladyfaire
I really like how your stories weave a story of love and lust. I like all your stories. Thanks.
Gave you a 5 for the draw out and tease. Very well done. THANK YOU!!
A pleasure to read from one who has a well crafted skill of the English language. Great story line as well with a perfect conclusion.
What a joy to find your well crafted erotic tale. It was amazing to hear how this woman, you Miss Layla, was seduced by this gentleman. He used charm, manners, and words to undress you. All love should be this subtle. By the times they had dinner at his house she had already decided to be taken by this man. Romance and Passion live on. Well done!!
What an absolute joy for all of the senses!! My love and I fell for each other this way, *sigh*. We have had 11 years so far and I love him as much as I did the first time I saw him (& with as much passion)! Thank you for such a sensual, exciting story. Please keep writing!!!
Yes happiness and lust is how my young lady and I started, she caught me lusting for her. Never thought anything would happen between us but she used those feelings of mine to win my heart to her love for me. Still hard to grasp in my mind.
We now have a sweet little baby girl that is the product of her love for me and my surrender to my desire for my young lady. Surprised by lust, joy, and love!
Yours affectionately,
A Treat
Such a delightful, romantic, sexy story you have penned. Such a delight to read and travel along two lovers journey!
It's me who thanks you for enjoying my story. It's perhaps the most wonderful feeling there is. I sincerely wish you happiness and lust ... the two can't breathe without each other ... LLF
Thank you for putting into words what is happening in my life at the moment!
This is a story that lovers dream. Your words seamlessly express the lust and love of life. Deserving of a win by all accounts.
What a well written erudite piece, thank you. It packaged romance, falling in love and the physical act all in one. I hope you win the Valentines competition