All Comments on 'Romance was Afoot'

by grayshade

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 6 years ago
Great First Story

I liked your first story but please in future don't use Texting Language because it breaks the story line.

Otherwise I found your writing excellent and I loved how you took your time to build the characters so that the reader can get a feel for them.

I hope you may think of writing a sequel.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous