by AudreyHepburn
I love it, but I want to know what happens next. Please write more.
Interesting. This has the flavor of a soap opera.
All the ingredients are here to make this story a 20-year saga.
It was a fun read filled with lots of details and engaging characters.
I wonder what will happen next.
I've been following Ms. Hepburn's stories from her debut on this site, and I continue to be amazed by her seemingly boundless powers of imagination. She builds plots that twist and turn, writes dialogue that feels true to life, and creates characters of depth and interest. I would like to see more sex however. This is "Literotica" after all. Nonetheless, I always look forward to her next posting. You go, girl!