All Comments on 'Rondi and the Photographer'

I enjoyed reading this, a lot. There was enough character development and feel to let me get that 'being there' feel. The story stretched no lines of credibility, at all. It also lacked the contrite aspects we tend to see nowadays. The ending was so surprising I had to read it twice. I never saw it coming. Well done!

The author could perhaps take some more time proofreading, or using an editor (I know I fall into that category as well), as there were some typo-type mistakes, but nothing devastating, other than a name inclusion. A hint of a real liasion, perhaps? ;)

All in all a good short worth the 5* I gave it!

(and you knew there would be one), take a slow read through it again. There is a mistake on the 1st page, where you call Cody "Austin". Not quite sure who Austin is, but, hey...

Good job, and keep up the good work.

SC