by Storm62
Aww emma is a sweeet chick what a very nice fanatsy normally wouldnt read a story like this but i do love emma ^^.
Thanks storm good job
Jim
A person can always dream, I enjoyed the story very much and the alternate endings in my opinion did not take away from the story.. Well done and look forwards to the next story.
It was a really decent story, you clearly know how to write. If I had a suggestion for improvement it would be to take slightly longer on the actual sex scenes. But a great story overall.
aah, this is so hot, and she is so cute, quite realistic character in here
I love this one
Lovely story and fun to read, a good tale for one of those nights alone in bed.