All Comments on 'Room #8'

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

Awwww. You go from insanely intense and hot to just sad in one line.....

redyellowgoredyellowgoover 10 years ago
welcome to lit

Interesting first offering. I am not for cheating in any way shape or form. But this story is well written, has a small background time line for just the story, has a build up to a lovely climax, and shows what is necessary of the characters to relate to them in the scene. Very well done. I'm looking forward to future work. And perhaps a look at room 8 again.

LBGrantLBGrantover 10 years ago

Well written....and heartbreaking. There can be no HEA here. Welcome to Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
When you start out on the road to revenge...

Dig 2 graves, or in this case 3.

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