All Comments on 'Room for Mickie Ch. 05'
by griffin57
- 16 Comments
griffin57over 7 years agoAuthorFor all those that waited so long for this final chapter. I am sorry it didn't come sooner. Finding time to write has been a bear these last few years. I would also like to thank the lady that inspired me to write this series. Josie, where ever you are Honey, I hope you are safe and warm and loved. You deserve it Sweetheart.
usmclassover 7 years agoYes, there is no doubt it; this is your best work so far. Sexy, sweet, insightful and funny. The humorous touches were just enough to remind us that sex, with the right partner, is supposed to be fun!
You write with a lot of heart. I look forward to what you bring us next.
IrvingParkeover 7 years agoBut I'm so glad that it did! This has been a beautiful series.
Anonymousabout 5 years agothis story was beautiful and very emotional. i hope to read more of your stories soon :)
Anonymousabout 5 years agoOne of my top3 stories on here. I reread it at least twice a year.
TalulaTSabout 3 years agoLovely, beautiful well written love story. My heart melted all the way through. Was waiting for the smut parts but there were none except for love scenes! Which, is refreshing and I think this has been the most beautiful stories I have ever read on here to date.
Although I’m a lesbian transsexual woman, I greatly enjoyed reading this beautiful piece. Even though it’s written from Rick’s first person perspective, I really felt for Mickie. Trans women really do need more men like Rick.. well at least the girls who like men that is. Wish I could meet a girl like Mickie too!!
Would be nice to read this story but from Mickie’s FPP. (hint hint)
Anonymousover 2 years agoSuch a well done fairy tale of a story. Loved it. Look forward to reading more of your stories. 5*
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWhat a wonderful, romantic story. I look forward to rereading it several times.
violetspiral12 months agoOverall, I found it "okay", but there was just some points that ruined it for me in the end.
First gripe with it, is that everything just seems to happen so fast? Sex is over in an instant, it's like two premature ejaculators got together. I get that sex can be over fast if you're incredibly excited, but each sex scene apart from one feels like it lasts for 10 seconds. Also, Teds whole personality and opinion on sexuality changing within the span of a day? Not gonna happen. Something like that is ingrained within your persona, and can take years to truly go away, if you've for some reason decided to suddenly change. I feel like the whole narrative would have been better if there was something to split the family apart, it all just feels too perfect. Michella/Mickie also only took, what, hormones for a year + some months while Rick and her was together, yet it's made to sound like she has curves like a woman already, with what it sounds like, very sizeable breasts? I think you're overestimating what hormones can do, especially within such a relatively short time. Most barely even see a change for a very long time. Transitioning with hormones only can take a VERY long time. As mentioned earlier, everything just seems a bit too perfect and fast.
Second gripe - for me, personally, there's just way too much lovey dovey stuff happening, with characters just saying way too many endearing words and sentences to each other. Not even Outlander or the old Roswell is this barf inducing in its worst moments combined.
Another note - Ted is described as a "little over" 6 feet tall, so I'm assuming he's 6'1-6'2. At the same time, he's described as broad shouldered, while having a weight of 310 lbs. I'm not sure you've thought about this, but for him to be 310 pounds at that height, would either make him strongman sized, or very, very obese, which he is not described as either. I am 6'3 and around 245-250 lbs (113 ish kg), classified as obese, but body wise I look skinny fat due to my broad shoulders and height. Put that into perspective. As an example, Eddie Hall was 6'2 and 313 lbs in 2022
