by Drmaxc
I loved the line about running with an erection. I don't see how that is possible!
You, sir, are a master in writing. I just love that fleeting, fresh wrting style, the lightness, the insouciance with which you push the action along. And it is so ..... humm ... inspiring ;-)
I think it is possible to run whilst erect just make sure you don't trip. Could be an eyewatering moment.
As for the story I think it's great, but wondering what the atmosphere will be like when Karen arrives !! Ouch?