All Comments on 'Room Mates Pt. 02'

by CateJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story so far

Hope you keep writing more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

Love this story so far and want to read more. Very well written, love the witty banter.

TallEric02TallEric02over 9 years ago
More, please!

You've nailed the art of just enough character development, just enough action, and plenty of tease. You're good!

Now, what do we need to do to encourage the next chapter?

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