All Comments on 'Room Mates Pt. 16: Epilogue'

I love the story and loved most of the ending but I don't know if I was the only one who thought it was weird when he was talking about the 4 way and one of the girls was his sister..!! I just it was awkward. I kept waiting for him to say without his sister... But that is me. Overall I liked the story.

Honestly I didn't even think about that! In my head it was clear they were step siblings but I only said that back in Ch. 1 and also... I just don't see that happening!!

Possibly worth taking it down and having an edit. But thanks for pointing it out and I'm really glad you liked it

And you do have real talent. Thanks for the story.

Very good

Thank you

like your angle of presentation. nicely done or wrote. slap hapy papy #9

The sister and Olivia? Nope. I thought Jake & Sammi might adopt Olivia’s baby & she’d go back to the states. At the very least, they should be married & living on their own.

Loved the story, but Olivia and Rosie, I didn't see that coming. Writing was very good, some grammatical errors, i.e., missing words etc. but overall, it was a well written story with a great storyline.

My only disappointment is that they didn't actually marry at end. But I guess it was still a happily ever after ending. 5 stars.