by Bill L Zee Bob
sale kutte kamine
suwar ke bacche
band kar apna website
teri maa ko chodu
bhosrike
bahen ko chodu
chal
bye
Great details. It really put me in the room with her. All her thoughts and reactions were utterly realistic, and the pacing was just right to give the reader the full effect without either rushing over details or getting bogged down in minutiae.
I liked that it was all from the woman's perspective, that the story started after she was bound in the room, and the tension as she tried to remain on her toes. The revelation of the bell in her hands at the end was perfect--showing that she willingly submitted.