All Comments on 'Room Wanted Ch. 02'

This story I love and each chapter gets more interesting.

It is clear that the children and grandmother approve the relationship between Ron and Naomi, but it seems that Ron does not decide to take the final step.

I understand that the intervention of social services is the work of Hillary, I do not think it is a matter of the older brothers of Naomi, although everything is possible ...

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Do people in the UK outside show business really say Darling all the time?

This story is getting better and better.Looking forward to the next instalment.To the anonymous one asking about the use of darling it is a common term of endearment here.Nothing unusual about it at all........darling !!

Please update soon!

“It's English English', not American English, sorry for any confusion but we were here first.” Perhaps, but, WE PERFECTED IT!

This just keeps getting better & better. I’ve taught EE, both in the AF and at the college level plus written training, operator & maintenance manuals so I know the amount of effort it takes to produce at this level. If only I had your creativity?

Thanks again for another excellent read.

I have fallen in love with these characters! Fabulous job! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I have enjoyed your previous stories but this is a cracker. Brilliant just keep it coming.

Great characters , great story line. Continue Please

what a cliffhanger! hope its not to long to see where this allegation is going

Some minor editing/continuity issues, but I have thoroughly enjoyed both chapters. I hope there is more coming and soon

It was so easy to get enthralled with the characters. The story was well written and different from what I'm use to reading. Please continue!!! Hopefully we don't have to wait long for a new chapter. It's too good to wait!

Loving this story, cant wait for the next chapter

I check for new chapters everday!

Great Story, love the plot

she is entitled to representation. If she is being interviewed in response to direct accusations she is entitled to representation. If her interview is being recorded she is entitled to representation.

No matter what country in which this is set it's time for mum and Rob to send a solicitor to her aid and tell her to STFU till further notice.

Do I have to mention how much I hate cliff hangers.

Perfected? Not Even!

What makes you think your version of the locally modified version of the Queen's English is better than Canada, Australia, South Africa, Jamaica, Hong Kong, or any of the other parts of the Common Wealth?

While she was "stood"

While she was "sat"

... is incorrect English in all those countries including UK. It is spoken, but wrong.

There are 2 things wrong with the "English" in my title. But we all know what it means, which is the point of language -- to let people know what you mean.

While "ain't" is wrong, it's used in popular or bluecollar song, poem and speech (here in America). Double negatives (ain't no) are also "wromg," but often used without loss of comprehension. You know, I just enjoy the (good) stories. BUT I DON'T ENJOY THE GRAMMAR POLICE. OK, some help is appreciated by authors. But I don't care for nitpicking when the meaning is understood. Besides, sometimes breaking the "rule" of language is useful. As Winston Churchill said, "A preposition is not a good word to end a sentence with" (help for some: "with" is a preposition).

I like the exotic flavor of British English.

It is amazing to me that someone can imagine and then put into such wonderful words a tale so charmingly heartwarming as this. Obviously 5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

I found the chapter delightful and you ended it at the perfect moment.

Although I'm not a fan of the last little bit. It's not believable or realistic. Almost seems like throwing in some drama and tension for the sake of wanting drama and tension instead of being part of the flow of the story.

Oh well. Other than the last scene it was a great story.

"Everyone took a go with the tree while Paul disappeared to his room, exhausted by his day's work, returning only to eat his tea and admire the balance that the tree had been decorated with, and he only re-arranged a few baubles."

:D Only the English can eat their tea.

Just teasing! Love Britannia, love the story!

I am an American and read and enjoy this story partially because of the British english.

For the rest I enjoy it for the wonderful characters and story.

Thank you

Another wonderful chapter !

Rapier

mostly rubbish concerning social services as divorced women (ex's) can have the boyfriend openly living her and poor smucks ex-husband not able to do anything. Perhaps social services is paying Rob, like a foster parent but he adopted all the kids, so what is their problem? Of course, it's his ex-wife making the complaint. Why would his ex-wife be in his house Christmas Day for more than just a few minutes?

Definite whole in this plot line. If Darrel is school Principal and friend of Rob why wouldn't he call Rob and clue him in?

Rob isn’t that great… he didn’t want the baby, so he wants her to take the morning after pill yet he expects her to take care of his 5 kids?