All Comments on 'Roommates'

i liked your story but there was oe thing that really bugged me and it's a hard thing hot me to overlook you started out i the past tense which was beautiful for this type of storu then you changed to a present tense and that is something that keeps me from gettig immersed in the story and getting as wet as i normally would but still a good story... just try to keep the next one in past tense