by Aeli
So she is destroying him. He finally professed his love. It was perfectly gut twisting. And she left him to sulk anyway.
In reality the story would play out just like this. I think most of the time (not all) woman (not girls but woman as in this case an adult woman) chose the safe bet. Eliott is safe and secure; both financially and emotionally. If she lost him she would be fine. She has a good job, and wouldn't be all that torn up emotionally. She'd get over Elliott fairly quickly and move on. Now if she makes a real attempt at a relationship with Alex, and it fails, she'd be devasted, heart broken and destroyed. That's what love does.
Reading this beautifully written story has been a roller coaster. It has also brought up a few memories of my wild freshman year in college. Ekkk lol I know! I was a girl then (18) so I chose love instead of the safe guy. Of course we ended up broken up and heartbroken - yes both of us. If I'd chosen the safe guy, we would be happily married with lots of babies and a house in the suburbs by now. I don't regret my decision for a minute. The passionate, volatile, and emotional relationship I had with love guy was a life changing experience; it lasted less than a year, but molded the way I approach relationships.
I sincerely hope you publish this. Try Amazon Kindle. You are extremly talented. Your writing skills are excellent. The reader feels everything the character feels. You must share it on a global level!!!! :-D
Oh and PS....please let her chose Alex! Better to have loved and lost than to have never truly loved at all....
Ok enough of the sappy cliches. I'll sign off.
I'm so happy you are continuing this story! I've been waiting forever. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. Good job!
I just found this story and read through all of them in a couple of days. Don't make us wait long for the next chapter. Loved it! I don't know who to root for. I'm not sure who the good guy is in all of this.
Please upload again soon!! This story is too good to wait months for another chapter! This is for sure one of my favorite stories
... but I'm sad she didn't pick Alex. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Or just keep us posted so we have an idea when you will post. Great chapter!
Where is Chapter 9?! Alex is heartbroken and Erica finds a ring and I need answers! Haha hope all is well and the story is eventually finished. Till then, I'll be waiting for Chapter 9.
This is my favourite series on the site so i really hope you plan to continue! till then I shall continue to reread the past chapters to get my fix!
Are you going to update anytime soon? People would be a lot more patient if you were better at communicating with your readers.
Are you coming back? Or is this the end? ......just looking for closure...
Please come back and finish this story. I check most days hoping for an update!
It's official, it's been a year. I am ashamed to admit how many times I've checked for an update in that year.
We've been waiting for over a year! Tell us something!
I’ve reread this series countless times. It’s just getting good.. please come back and finish it.
I come back to reread this series/my favorite chapters over and over again I want to see how this continues to unfold! Please keep writing!
Please Aeli, update! This series is one of the best on here.... Please please please update i need more Erika and Alex
I love your stuff and I'm desperate to know how this one ends! Sexy as fuck but also a genuinely good story.
Please do another chapter its been years my dick has dried up waiting. I live your work thanks.
It’s been 5 years! I never read chapter stories on this dang site. I’m so mad at tho.
Elliot is painfully weak to take her back, a real doormat. It's highly unlikely to happen in real life
I just hate there being so many unfinished stories on here.
5 Stars for every previous chapter, but just 2 for this because I am so damn annoyed with there bring no ending.
Rapier