by josienicole
Very hot, but I can't give a five to a story that doesn't bother to name the main character in a third-person narrative that includes another character of the same sex. "She" and "her" could apply to either Lissa or What's-her-name equally within a paragraph or sentence. If you want the main character to be considered as a real person, at least name them as you do the supporting characters. But a strong four for hot sex.