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by anorris0812

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
Yet another new writer -

- yet another fine story! We are really doing well of late. This was a beautifully-told, almost poetic story that had me in its thrall from the first sentence; I think we have a serious contender in our midst and I hope anorris0812 will bring us much more of this quality erotica.

Just one little thing - watch your paragraph lengths; some of them were in danger of becoming word-blocks, and they are always off-putting.

Thank you, welcome to Literotica - it's nice to be the first to say that - and more, please.

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