All Comments on 'Rory and Sebastian Ch. 14'

so different from the average teen-boys-first-love story; these two feel so real, and they are brilliant.

I'm glad Rory is finally getting therapy, but I am totally getting a "calm before the storm" feeling here.

I've just got three things to say about this:

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

A beautiful chapter but I agree that it feels like the calm before the storm. I suspect that college will cause some problems for the boy but I think they'll work through it all. Thankfully, Rory finally went into therapy; he really needed it.

This story has such a quality of reality to it. Please write faster.

This is the most beautiful, touching, and romantic story I've read on this site. It's also one of the most interesting and realistic, and one that I feel that I can relate to. I think you're a great writer, and you've created something wonderful here. Please keep writing :)

I'm re-reading this from the beginning while waiting for Chap 20. Love your writing, you have a beautifully realistic tone and wonderful imagery.

Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

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