All Comments on 'Rory and Sebastian Ch. 21'

I am overjoyed, as always, to see this story update. It is easily my favourite on this site and is truly beautiful. Thank you for taking the time to write this, and I eagerly anticipate the next update.

Grateful to see the continuation of this beautiful love story. You're an amazing author. I'm glad you keep writing there story. 😀

I love this story so much. I am always so anxious for the next chapter, and also a little sad that we are getting closer to the end. You are easily the best all-around writer on this site. Great work.

I am so happy you updated on their journey as a couple, I love and want to see more of them dealing with Rory's body image issues as well as Sebastian's need to gain approval of others (as in how he gets annoyed where people thinks he is cheating on Rory etc). Anxiously waiting for more =)

Hi Sebastiando, LaVieErotique here. Gorgeous, tender, moving, loving, wonderful. A joy, as ever, to read.

After stupid day coming home and by accident checking on the story i was so nicely surprised!!! Loved it, tender and in tune, just hope it will not take 5 more months for next chapter to come out!

Keep up with amazing work!

So happy to see these guys back. Short but sweet, can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you so much. This story is one of my favourites, and I thought that I will have to wait so long for a new ch.; so thanks again. I know you are the writer, but anyway:

Can you kill Joshua, or something alike? LOL- I hope that character wasn't based or inspired on a real person; nobody could be such nasty and evil.

I love this couple, I love the deep connection between them, not only the thing of the flesh but the emotional and even spiritual bond. I love their personalities, how "cavern man" and "basic" Sebastian could be, but at the same time so... tender? I don't know, and well Rory... Rory is simply adorable.

Can't wait for more!

So happy you're back! Love this story!

Please write more soon!

I'm so happy you are continuing this story! I don't have much reason to come to this site now, but when I do I always check and see if you've updated! Sebastian is right, Rory is completely lovely. Their imperfections are so nice and refreshing and I'm glad you decided to take your time on this one. Forgiveness and love take time after all!

I love this story so much. I check back always for updates! I love your writing and am still waiting for the next chapter eagerly

Great story, great writing! The hot, dirty, passionate sex is appreciated but I also love the fact that a story is being told and not just scenarios being created for mindless sex. Also the fact that you spell and punctuate correctly, makes your story worthy of a high rank in LITerotica. Please continue in the same vein till their HEA.

I love this sweet story:) please let us know when we can expect the next chapter!

Your story is so much more than shallow porn. It is a work of art! You are an incredible writer! Please elaborate on this story as much as possible. The way you portray the characters is lovely and I want to have as much background info as possible. I never want this story to end!

I never want this to end! My favourite part of this story is the first few chapters where you really took your time to give us some background information. I love all the little details. This story feels so real!

You are so talented! You had me hooked with the first chapter! Like really! This story really enveloped me in it! I felt like I was apart of this story with all the ups and downs! I really need more! I just do! I loved the sex and the pain and the lust... But mostly I really enjoyed how you captured the love between the two! You need to do something more with this, or just something similar! Please! I wish I could give you more than a favorite and 5 stars! I just love this story! It would make a wonderful movie! Congratulations! :)

We used to get updates so much faster, it's killing me! I need the rest of the story, it's so good.

I sure hope there will be more coming soon... I spent the last 24 hours living your story... I need more.... thanks for sharing

This story is down right amazing! It makes me feel emotions that I never thought I could feel, you are such a talented writer. Keep up the good work I can't wait for the next part!

So I just found this story two or three days ago, and I haven't been able to stop reading. I love it. The intensity, the characterization, the emotion, the heartbreak and the love. I love that you have brought these two guys through hell to build and strengthen their relationship (and plus, the sex is amazing ;)) You are very talented, and I can't wait until the next chapter. It is so refreshing to read a story on this site that grips you. You have made us fall in love with your characters. Thank you.

Please please write some more You kept me very entertained throughout the whole story I really think you should write another series about them getting married and having kids...#Amazing #LovedIt

It's been over 6 months since you last posted so I really hope that you are okay. I know life gets busy, but please keep your readers updated on how you're doing. I hope this isn't the end of Rory and Sebastian and I'll keep coming back to see if there's a new chapter. Been reading this story for over a year. I begin to tell you how much I am in love with these characters. I've read this story so many times it almost feels like they're family.

Another great chapter! (And I kind of have to laugh about the people crying for an update...they don't know the pain of those of us who were around for the post-19 hiatus :P ) If you do decide to continue this story that would be lovely, it's one of the best I have ever read. :D

we need an update!

i love sebastian and i obviously wanted him and rory to be together, but he just seems so... selfish and domineering. like in chapter 12 when rory told sebastian he was bulimic, he threw a tantrum. when someone you love just told you that they're in so much pain that they're literally killing themselves, you think the best thing to do is scream about how badly that makes YOU feel and how all your "hard work" and making them feel good about themsleves was for nothing? then sebastian made him spend the day talking about how his issues began! he should've told rory that he was sorry and it was ok and that he'd help him in whatever way rory needed him to, he shouldn't have forced rory to tell him things he wasn't comfortable telling him. and in chapter 15, when they broke up after sebastian kissed that guy, he said that he wouldn't tell rory what he did and that he'd just have to carry the weight of that secret on his shoulders AND that the break up hurt him more than it hurt rory. sebastian always puts his feelings and his crazy, posessive love for rory over everything else, including rory! and rory always agrees and says that it's what's best bc it's romantic and sebastian loves him. they let their love for each other keep them from doing what's best, especially what's best for rory.

even with all that, i still love this story so much (even though it doesn't sound like it now) and i'm so glad you keep writing! you're so talented and we've all fallen in love w the characters you've created. please hurry w the next chapter!

can we please get an update?! it's been nearly a year and we do NOT want a repeat of what happened with chapter 19 lol. i honestly don't mean to pressure you bc i'm sure you have your reasons for not writing, but the wait is killing me!

Please write more chapters or separate stories if you have the chance, I think you're brilliant

Just finished reading your story and wanted to say that you are an amazing writer and managed to capture many nuances of romance and intimacy that are hard to find in other stories. At the same time , the stories are really hot and sexy ! If you ever decide to publish let us know so we can buy your books, ;-) hope to keep reading your stories , good luck!

I just love your stories. My God is was fantastic. I laughed, I cried and cheered when they got back together!! Would love to see more

This is my favorite story of all time! You are an amazing writer and Rory and Sebastian are amazing characters who you have brought to life with all their flaws and their love for each other.

I just hope you at least return to give us an ending to the best story on literotica. Please!

I absolutely love it!!!! Thanks for posting.

I keep on coming back to this story. It's just so perfect. Will there be more? If you publish please let us know - i will buy your books any day!!

Just came across Rory and Sebastian a couple of days ago. Absolutely love them and their story. Please, please, please tell me there will be more coming (pun intended) even after so long wrapping up chapter 21. I have to know how the big question gets asked!

I know you haven't posted in a long while but it sounds like you had more in the works! I am still clinging to a hope that you will post more someday as you have suprised me in the past! I have looked all over the net for more of the story to be posted to another site, no luck. :( I've been reading about Rory and Sebastian for a couple years... I just reread it all again as I'm prone to do every 6 months or so. So if you still read your comments please know there are some of us still out here wanting to know what happens for them. If you are just no longer planing to continue this story a quick post say so would be greatly appreciated (still hoping for more of course)... Thank you!!!

Can't wait to wake up one day and see new chapter... Please we are dying to read more of ur work

I just found this story and can't believe how enthralled I became with it. It's by far one of my favorite stories on Literotica. Please, please continue on with it.

I started this story in 2013 and check every month on the occasion that you have returned. I really hope you are okay :(

It's hands down my favorite. It's exquisite. Can't get enough. Would buy the book if it was published. Cheers!

when can we expect the next chapter? i've been waiting literally YEARS to see how you'll finish this amazing story! pls let us know when and how you'll continue it soon. wish you the best!

i love how you mention the bits that they remember so clearly from the future :)

Is there a reason you quit writing? Did you start writing elsewhere? Are you trying to publish? I can't find anymore anywhere and I have been wondering for years what becomes of them? I know you planned to write more when you wrote this last chapter. I hope you're ok, I hope you return to finish this story and I hope if you publish you will let us know where.

I literally check this site daily just to see if there's an update to the story. For 2 years now!

hey! i looooove this story so much! it’s one of the best on this site for so many reasons and i can’t wait to see what happens next. clealry you planned to write more, at least at one point you did, so i just wanna say that i hope you’re ok and doing well. praying for you!

I hate sering how long it has been since you last updated...I do hope you get the time...inspired ...are well to continue thank you for a great series the voices of the characters were great as well as the detail you put into them.... even if you can't continue thank you again ♡

Spent the whole day reading all chapters! I want more!

hey! just letting you know that i looooove your work and that this story has resonated with me ever since i discovered it in high school so many years ago. even now, i still love rereading it. thank you for such an amazing story and i hope that you find the time to continue it one day. but even if you can’t, i really hope you’re doing well and wish you all the best!! you’re amazing and you deserve all the good things life has to throw at you!

Hope you are well. More Sebastian and Rory, I love these characters

i first started reading this story in 2012 and even now that it is 2019 i still reread it and hope that it will be updated one day. i hope you are doing alright!

i can’t believe it’s been 5 years since this story’s unofficial conclusion haha. you are just sooooo talented and this was and is such an amazing work that you created. its the perfect young adult romance story that i needed when i first discovered it in high school, which feels fucking crazy to even write, but it still holds up today. i’ll always be praying for an update, but thank you thank you thank you for rory and sebastian. they’ll always hold a special place in my heart.

I have now spent the past three days reading over this wonderful story. It has been written with skill, love and understanding. It is beautiful. I sincerely hope that in your good time, it continues through at least until after they have married. Thank you!

When I started this series, I didn't know I would be reading one of the finest works on this website.

You have given every characters a believable and distinct personality, and you create a very realistic scheme of relationships. The story itself is done masterfully, the theme of bulimia and the contrast between Rory's exterior self-confidence that served as a mask for his inner struggling was something I simultaneously hated and loved to read.

All the breakup story arc was done very well, it was unfortunate, but you already foreshadowed the reunion and even the life as a couple in the distant future so I wasn't overwhelmed by it.

In one of the last chapters you said in the comments "This story will reach around 30 chapters", and then I was struck by the realization that I was reading an incomplete piece of work, I panicked a little, not gonna lie. I experienced it one time with Togashi's Hunter x Hunter (though it is technically in a hiatus) and i didn't want to experience it again.

There's something strange, usually the stories that aren't complete are also the one that stays in your mind/heart longer. Not giving a closure to "Rory and Sebastian" is somewhat a torture but also a blessing, you can feel the possibilities still open for the story, and you can't help to imagine what will happen to them in their future.

I believe there won't be a chapter 22 (no shit, sherlock), but thanks to your previous foreshadowings, I feel like Ch.21 can be a fitting conclusion.

Thanks for your work, stay well.

I STILL come back to check to see if this has been updated. So invested in how these characters get to their happy ending.

I truly hope you are ok and SOMEDAY start writing again. Hugs who ever and where ever you are. May harmony find you 😘😘😘

Is the Patreon account legit and we’ll start seeing new chapters there if we join, or has someone just copying the content and made up and account to make money?

Anonymous below- I joined bc I was desperate, but had the same fear. And you might be right- so far it’s just what’s already here.

So well written and so many unanswered questions. I wish there were a way for authors to note their works are complete. I run into this a lot.

I hate when a story just stop. I hope the author is ok. Thanks for such an intense an beautiful story.