All Comments on 'Rose'

A nice coming of age story very well told. I hope Rose enjoys reading it as well.

Enjoyed the story. Realistic situation for those of us a bit older.

Your "Finis" ending reminds me of a college roommate when papers had to be submitted typed, without word processing software. He wrote the paper longhand and sent to a typist. Turned in the paper without re-reading. His last line got a comment from the professor. "Au Finis."

I perceive a hint of autobiography in this story, i.e. the "D. H. Lawrence" reference. Your work is honest, thoughtful and well crafted. It may not be DHL, but it is damn good and you have every reason to be proud of it. I have a collection of Literotica links and yours is at the bottom; I save the best for last.

It must have been great to have a fuck buddy like Rose. Too bad she moved away before graduation. Great story, by the way.

Wonderful story. I can relate to Rose, talents to share and superficial assholes who really don't deserve them.

Loved this, so well written great characters and descriptions, plenty of sex ( as this site deserves).