by scouries
great and clean fun story.get some v pills for help.
This may well be your sexiest story ever. I really love it. I am close enough in age to the 61 year old professor to be able to have a huge appreciation for the charms of a beautiful young woman, even two beautiful young women. The thing I really like about your stories is that your characters are nice people, the kind of people I would like without sex as part of the equation. Rose is magnificent. Dani was the key to Rose's charms. Great!
Nookiehunter
I will start with the obvious. You master with no doubt superior talent for writing. It’s Intelligent and humorous. Plus the best erotic writing comes when the involved bodies and their words are mixed in equal parts – and that’s what we had here!
The one tic I could not care for (and quite central for the theme of this story) is the macho/bravado of two women one man B.S. For me the story was perfection up to the point of the introduction of the “Bimbo blond”. Now we not only have Mr. Higgins but also the prostitute with the golden heart. The more the merrier. How silly. It virtually ruined the fantasy for me. While at it why didn’t you put three; five; why not ten women in each of your empty houses; oh great Sultan? It could have been a GREAT intimate and credible tale of autumn/spring relations, which you STARTED so well. But the temptation for over reaching proved to be too strong.….
with the last commentator's view. The story is great until the introduction of Dani. It somewhat weakens the romantic stuffs between Rose and the prof. But I still give you a five, because you want it. No, you deserve it. The defect cannot obscure the virtues you have rendered in the whole story.
Great writing, great humor, and it stands out from the
crowd. Thank you!
I think this is the best story of yours I have read so far,I wish I could give it more than 5 stars.
I really wish and hope you will write more to this story, it is just fantastic. really enjoyed reading it very much. I haven't ever left a comment for any story on literotica if that tells you anything.
I've read all of your stories and love the genre and content. This story line leaves a lot of room for expansion and you really need to start the second family line right now. Dani and Rose impregnated but at slightly different times... such great possibilities too. Please don't let this one lie fallow.
.......I truly enjoyed the story...good work...does Rose have any helpers....
scouries u are an amazing literotica writer. the storys arent over sexed bu t the storylines are amazing and you are one of the best writers on this site and i would love if you continued writing these awsome stories of yours
I love reading all your stories. Made you one of my favoriate authors. Keep up the good work. Looking for new stories from you. Have a great day and even a better night........LeRoy
I've read quite a few of your stories, and this is one of the most enjoyable.
No comments for a long time, wonder why? A well written, beautiful love story. Plausible. It could happen just the way you write it. Will there be be perturbations in paradise down the road? Of course, life's like that. You could write a sequel, but this one doesn't demand it as some of your other stories do. Maybe "they lived happily ever after" will do.
I admire your mind and your skill. So unusual to read stories that are both well crafted and imaginative. City of Brotherly Love would do well to be so delightful.
I have just stumbled over you and am so enjoying your very arousing erotica.
Rose is hot and her and Dani make a great 3some with you
***** Wow great story. Very unique storyline with twists and turns. Good read thanks for sharing.
At least a second read maybe 5-7 years later and slowly remembered the storyline but not the ending! I would have liked a little more past the ending but superb erotic story!
I love the interplay between these two! It's a shame you're not writing anymore Scouries...at least here.