by LustyLovers
I loved this story! The love and sincerity of the characters is phenominal. It has a quality to it that I can't explain. This story is extremely well written. Thank you very much for an entertaining and moving read! I'll definitely be waiting to read more of your work!!
This is quite possibly the most beautiful piece I have ever read. I can't stop crying.
This is the sweetest story I have ever read. I tried the entire time not to cry. :D Great job. I am going to look up your other stories and hope for the best! Thanks again, and keep up the great work!
Luckie_Duckie
Okay, I cried the entire time. Just call me a softy but it was a really sad though moving story. You're a very gifted writer! Thank you for putting it online so we could enjoy it!
from trying not to cry the whole time. A beautiful, bitter/sweet story.
This is one of the best stories I have read so far. Very well written, excellent imagery. I pictured the whole story in my head like a small movie (and that doesn't happen often!). Superb job, keep writing!
It brought tears to my eyes.
Great imagination.
Your sex scene, wrong LOVE MAKING scene was highly erotic & sensual yet incredibly intimate.
Thank you for your unique story.
A very riveting story, not sure how it was going to end and just had to keep reading. It's 84 degrees outside right now, but I swear I was feeling the cold wind and snow hitting me. Maybe it's just the A/C doing it's best, but I think the author had a part to play by describing the situation with such detail and emotion.