All Comments on 'Rose Petals on a Bed'

We do this, you do that? Can't stand stories written in the present tense like this.

It is a story - something that has happened, not something that's happening right now.

I was having an erection by the time I was half way through! I could almost feel those thighs and silk panties and smell that oil! Don't worry about that critic who objected to present tense. A story that intense calls for present tense!