by pop_54
The fact that this was an old story told is still a good wooody builder. I enjoy anal and this was nice. The "love you" bit sends a message that the couple really cared for each other.
in the first sentence you say it was his first anal with a female person. does that mean he has had anal with guys or animals before that? thats the way you make it sound, if your smart you will delete the story and rewrite it using a good editor like you should have this time.