All Comments on 'Roth & Rulongh'

Good story, but you should have had Rulongh sit on Roth's face after he finally was allowed to have sex with her. Otherwise, the whole domination aspect of the story is lost in my opinion.

I thought I would chime in, as I have quite a few stories in this dept. I am always looking for new story ideas, and possibly a collaboration. Your story is very good, especially since you stated that you were not an expert on the subject. Could you possibly return the favor by reading some of mine and offering an opinion