All Comments on 'Rough around the Edges Ch. 04'

Great idea, bringing Dante and Deborah together. I also like how egotistical/clueless Dante is.

dante and deborah need to get a clue, and i'm happy you smartened jade up because i wanted to slap her stupid after that stunt with kicking james out the house.

Why is it that after the breakup the "loser" all of a sudden grows a pair?! Sad really.

the plot thickens...

this is going to keep me up many a night...

I'm addicted to this story! I hope you will update!

I can't wait for the next update!

i have been up for hours reading the first stories between katrina and scott and then the spin off between jade and james and I AM HOOKED.. this needs to be a tv show or something.

I love it so much!!! I hope you do Nik and Dominique next. THat would be awesome!!

I love this story but its a bit unbelievable how Deborah just shows up. Idk but I am excited to read more :)

a brick. Hope eevery who deserves their comeupins gets them and soon. Girlfriends like that get popped in the back of the head with a "SANAP OUT OF IT"!!! Thanks

I really like your stories, but sometimes I feel as if you are confusing your characters names or giving them new ones in the middle of the stories. Maybe I am confused but I thought James wife was named Lorraine in Scott and Katrina story. I thought James last name was Morris.

I totally saw this coming, they'll just have to fight it out in the next chapter.

DANTE....YOU ARE A DUMBASS. I WOULD CALL YOU A JACKASS, BUT THAT WOULD BE OFFENSIVE TO ANIMALS...

Thank you :)

KICK HIS ASS, JAMES!

Dante just made a deal with the devil.poor boy

NO THE DEVIL AND DANTE IS ABT TO GET AN OL FASHION BEAT DWN

am i the only person notice that Dante always claim to be busy with his family but as soon she tells him its over him makes time to visit his x-girlfriend ... glad she finally on her eyes n let that lame go

I am in love with Jade and James as a couple. Just always reading about "their lips crashing into each others" is a little exhausting. It's used a LOT in this story. I understand they are kissing aggressively, but a phrase can be used too much. I don't mean to make you feel attacked, and I apologize if you are taking it that way. I catch myself doing something similar in my own writing, and when I proofread it, I have to reiterate that word or phrase in a different way. It really is a good follow-up story, though. Wonder about Dominique and Nikolas now. I just can't read it until I'm done with this one. ~SIGH~

Deborah and Dante are getting on my nerves. God, I hate relationship conflicts! ~SIGH~ Oh well, I guess it has to be done. :-\