All Comments on 'Rough Draft: Twisted Ink'

Glad they got it together. They were exhausting with all the drama.

Good communication works wonders.

it wasn't romantic by any means.

I really liked the first story, this one had just as excellent writing.

I didnt like the sharing part, it just really did not seem to fit. So would have edited that out.

Very good set of stories, hope to see more with these characters/setting.

5 stars

I love series stories and this did not disappoint at all. I'm glad you continued with Ben and Jen,gave them a good back story and got us fans ready for the next installment. I'm hoping for Kyle,but the double duo would be be good also. Keep it up,you got a fan in me.

I loved it but didn't like the sharing part guess I'm a one person kind of girl but all and all great story can't wait for more from you. And I disagree adout the not a romance comment not everything is white wine and soft kisses people sometimes have to go through shit to be together and there's nothing more romantic than what someone is willing to go through for the people they love.

I love that it wasn't a conventional romance. There were a few errors but it is a rough draft so that was understandable. You should continue writing you are really good at it.

Fantastic story... Loved every bit of it! So hot...

Keep writing !!!!!!!!

Great story, I really enjoyed it but found the switching between characters without notice a small bit confusing at times

This was an awesome read. Kept me alert from the start to finish. Good to see that it all worked out in the end.

I think I would have liked “Final Draft” better. This “Rough Draft” just annoyed me.

I know a lot of people will like this story and that’s great for them. But I didn’t care for it. It just seemed to ramble on without going much of anywhere. And I didn’t find a single main character I could give a flying snap about. Maybe the final draft will be better.

I can’t stand people who comment just to be rude! Constructive criticisms are one thing being rude to someone who wrote something and posted it online for you to read for your entertainment for free is quite another! Seriously rude anon posters really need to get a new hobby! You don’t like it don’t read it. No one forced you to read 11 pages of a story you “don’t like” get a life!

Devinamaria I love all your posts, I have read all 4 a few times over the years. I love this group! I would love to hear more... I’m still hopeful you will come back and add kyles story sooner or later... maybe even lana’s too?

An amazing story. Great conflict makes the resolution sweeter!