All Comments on 'Rough Ride'

There's rough and there's makeup won't hide the bruises abusive. Your writing is technically solid. Your description is well done and easily puts the reader into the scene. I just don't find anything about it erotic.

Anonymous... Then you haven't ever had this kind of please... It's absolutely earth shattering, Mmmm.

Great story!

Solid writing and very erotic.

No chance of getting hard when abuse results in blood. Submissive is one thing, but this exceeds my tolerance.

The abuse factor is too much. Great solid piece though