All Comments on 'Roxie & Erica: Blair's Victory Pt. 02'

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TgCarlaTgCarlaover 8 years ago
Spoiled

Talk about spoiling what was a great story, this ruined it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loved It!

You shoud write some more stories with this theme and style

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you TgCarla

was going to read this whole series but change my mind after I read your comment save me some time. I'm not into grows stuff it's very uncleanliness not sure why some people are into it

iceblockiceblockover 5 years ago
Too consensual

This just ended being too consensual for my liking. It was so much hotter when the two Girls were being forced to serve their hated rival rather than doing it willingly like two lovers. Thank You for Your efforts but I think You missed the mark with this one. Cheers.

CarlaSissy76CarlaSissy7610 months ago

I tried to like Blair wins, but it didn't make any sense at all, sorry this should never have been written, cock hating lesbians now having to serve them, nah totally wrong, making the warden a pet, nah wrong again, Blair having a like minded girlfriend just didn't fit into this story at all, it should have ended with Erica being released and exploring her slut side as a free woman.

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