All Comments on 'Royal Sentence Ch. 06-07'

Well-written chapter with many historic detalis, but short, add very little to story develpment.

A joy to read.

Thank you

DC

I can't wait till the next chapter!

The choice of words is nice along with the flow of story. I think you have a great potential to make this story a masterpiece.

I just found your story today and have gobbled it up in no time at all. I eagerly await the next installment. Please write more (while you aren't adoring your new granddaughter).

She eats a meal; he talks to the king. A bit short on story development after over a seven month wait. Intriguing story; pity the authur no longer has time to write it. Life happens. Will check back on this story in about five or six years if still alive.

Loving it, please don't leave this unfinished

Please keep going I'm really enjoying it

I am so sorry to read that you have a sick granddaughter. That is incredibly trying. I am sending you and yours warm thoughts.

Your story is a wonderful respite from my own stresses of caregiving. I sincerely thank you for sharing your talent. I look forward to reading more of Sabine and Roland's story.

Grr stupid new format wouldn’t let me give this the 5 stars it deserves!

Reading this story again! One of the best ones on this site :)

Say what?! She found it 'vaguely comforting' that "many women left his chamber crestfallen and he treated all women this way...if he did this to all women, could it just be the usual way of men? And if it was, perhaps he didn't mean to humiliate her?' You character is missing her frontal lobe if she takes "comfort' in the fact that he's done this to so many women and and he's not trying to 'humiliate' her - were you high when you wrote this?