All Comments on 'Rude Awakening'

by VelvetDarkness

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gypziedollgypziedollover 16 years ago
Absolutely Amazing

I loved the intensity, and could feel the fire and passion between both Master and His pet. Another winner Sweetness.

JckHmmr_2000JckHmmr_2000over 16 years ago
GREAT JOB!

Great pacing and description in the story! I found myself drawn in, as if I was the male character in your story! 5 Stars! Keep up the GREAT WORK! BRAVA! Encore!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
WOW!

ohhhhh my god that was an amazing story! I am so impressed with the domination! please keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago

Verey good loved the way the master treted his slave

Leto DegeneresLeto Degeneresover 15 years ago
Insommnia

I'm thinking about my sleep tonight and what could happen in another life! I want to read another of yours...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wrong category?

This story was sweet and I loved it, but I think it belongs in BDSM more than in NonConsent.

~daisy

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yummy

loved it, haven;t cummed that hard in a while :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
:)

Very good. One of the best I've read :)

That girl is very lucky, i wish i had a man like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Someone be my master. I so want this

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

great story but when you brought up the safeword it was a turn off

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

he asked her to say the safe word after he had already thrusted himself into her dry asshole in just one go whats the point now when you already hurted her insides?

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